Weekend Writing Warriors: 24 March

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I want to thank all those who visited for Weekend Writing Warriors last week! I appreciate all the feedback. I’ve been posting from my WIP currently called STOPPING BULLETS. My main character is a young woman, Justine, with a talent for stopping bullets and moving other things with her mind. She lives a secretive life to avoid becoming a lab rat somewhere.

I’ll continue from last week, where we saw the shooter’s reaction to what Justine had just done. (For the full story so far, see my past SSS posts! The first one is here.) Here are the next eight sentences in the scene:

That broke the spell. He turned and ran without a word.
I pocketed the cartridge. Another to add to my collection at home. 
I turned to leave when a rustling stopped me. Quinn was closer than I’d thought. My stomach twisted. So stopping the bullet had been the easy part.

This is a work in progress, so with that in mind, I welcome your comments!

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